blog #12

Self-Check
1. I feel that I have answered the prompt to the best of my ability.
2. Well, I have a thesis that states that Rodrigues uses contrasts, but I Didn't state why, I stated how.
3. My paragraphs do build on each other and they continue to build up untill I get to my conclusion where I tie it all together.
4. I had two main body paragraphs that suggested how Rodrigues "build the house". They are both two different ideas which include two concrete details.
5. I used a couple of quotes right out of the txt to make my argument more real.

Refelction
1. I think I answered the prompt well considering I only had a limited amount of time.
2. I don't think my intro went too well. My thesis is good but the background to introduce my essay didn't have a strong hook.
3. If given more time my essay would be better structured and well planned out. Because it was first timed essay, I kinda just threw some things together and did my best to make them work well.
4. No. My essay did not come out the way I planned it because I didn't really have time to plan it. there was almost no organisation in my essay.
5. As I was writing I realised how much I agree with Rodrigues about the bold statement of the plastic pink flamingo.
6. I need to take at least five minuets before I start writing to plan out what I intend to write. Just Make a brief and minor outline